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Dream On - Pimmy/Mika (OC) - Rated PG-13

My first posted fic! Enjoy everyone!

Title: Dream On
Characters/Pairing: Pimmy/Mika (OC)
Words: 198
A/N: Just a short story I wrote to tell the other side of Pimmy's dream...the side Gemcity obviously 'forgot' to write before he was distracted by loading the book with pages of innuendo between Tommy and Tibbs. *eyeroll*

The corpse was cold in his arms, and Pimmy shivered, with lust as much as with cold. Still, even in death she was as beautiful as when she was alive, and he couldn't stop himself. Their lips met-

And Pimmy sat up straight in bed, feeling sick to his stomach.

He felt something cold rub against his leg and he nearly screamed. Pimmy jumped out of bed, only looking back at it when he was across the room by the closet.

Mika, his girlfriend, was staring sleepily at him.

"What's the matter, Baby?" she asked, sitting up. Pimmy let out a breath he hadn't realized he was holding.

"You put your feet on me again," Pimmy said, walking back toward the bed. "Or should I say those ice blocks that you claim are your feet?"

Mika laughed, looking up at Pimmy with a huge grin. "Well, if you didn't have to get up so early tomorrow, you could help warm me up."

Pimmy grinned at Mika. "Damn my luck."

He got back into bed, wrapping his arms around his beautiful girlfriend. She kissed him, and he kissed her back, and they drifted off to sleep again.



( 4 comments — Leave a comment )
Oct. 7th, 2007 02:20 pm (UTC)
Haha, sex with dead people. Oh, that's classic. I love that Thom writes fanfic about everyone at NCIS. :D Hilarious.
Oct. 10th, 2007 08:40 pm (UTC)
Well it was obviously a nightmare. :) I don't know if Gemcity writes fanfic, though I hope he maybe reads these boards every once in a while. Who knows? Maybe he'll get inspired to actually let us know what happened in Pimmy's past that would make him have such a horrible nightmare?

I'm really glad you liked my story! I hope to write a lot more once work lets up a bit! :)))
Oct. 8th, 2007 06:06 pm (UTC)

"Or should I say those ice blocks that you claim are your feet?"

That sentence is a little stiff; I just can't hear Pimmy saying that in that way.
Oct. 10th, 2007 08:41 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I'm hoping it's the kind of exposition we (eventually) get from Gemcity. Something more realistic and interesting than just 'Pimmy is obsessed with his job'. I'd like to hope that Gemcity is a better writer than to settle for that.

That sentence is a little stiff;

Haha, stiff, corpse. :) I thought the same thing too, actually, but I decided to go with it because I thought it was something my JPimmy would say to his girlfriend especially when her feet really are that cold.
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